Your words aren't having the impact you want because you're writing the way you speak, not the way readers read.
The way that you speak is full of fluff—verbal tics and fillers that work fine when speaking make your ideas sound bloated and dull on the page.
Even brilliant people struggle if they don't know how to write clearly.
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