1:1 Writing Consultation 50 minutes, live on your draft

Bring the draft that won't take shape.

Leave with a structure designed for your reader.

The videos give you the method. In our 1:1 session, we'll apply it to your draft.

No losing your voice to heavy-handed editors or cookie-cutter AI.

No cheerleading.

Just a reader-focused process you can learn, practice, and own.

Let's get to work

Limited weekly slots · send your draft 24 hours ahead

William Fitzpatrick
William Fitzpatrick 7 years, director of a university writing lab 10 years, English professor 20,000 writers following on YouTube

You've rewritten it ten times.

Friends call it “interesting.” ChatGPT makes it sound like everyone else. Editors fix the commas. Courses hand you a template.

Nobody tells you what your reader needs next, or why the whole thing won't hold together.

What you get

  • A diagnosis of why your draft isn't working, and exactly how to fix it
  • Feedback on the draft that matters: a grant, a chapter, a paper, a talk
  • Structure for a pile of material with no shape built from your own notes, not a template
Writer Science · 1:1 CoachingAfter your call

Your action plan

A 3–5 page session guide: a profile of your reader, your argument mapped section by section, and a checklist for the next draft.

How I work

Live, on your text. Send your draft 24 hours ahead if you like, but the work happens together in the session. You see each judgement as it's made, so you can push back while I'm still in the room.

Readers, not rules. I'm obsessed with readers. Your text needs to work for them, not for me. Every edit comes back to a single question: what does the reader already have, and what do they need next?

A process you keep. I'm not a ghostwriter or the kind of editor who will change everything to match my voice. I'm a writing coach. My goal is to train you in a reader-focused method that you can practice in shaping your writing yourself.

$145 / 50-minute call (USD)

Bring one piece and one problem. To keep going, there's a 10-session package, and the first call's fee rolls into it.

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Who this is for

  • Academics with a grant, a journal article, a job-market statement or a book under contract
  • Professionals turning hard-won expertise into a book, a newsletter or a category of their own
  • Creators turning their ideas into IP, growing an audience and building a personal brand
  • Second-language writers who've been told the problem is their English. It almost never is.

Not a fit

  • Fiction, poetry or screenplays
  • Proofreading or line edits
  • Having the writing done for you
10+ yearsas an English professor at a top-tier research university in South Korea
7 yearsdirecting the university writing lab, helping experts get their ideas published, funded, and cited
20,000+writers on YouTube who trust my teaching in nonfiction writing

What Clients Say

Sandra L.
Sandra L.
Interpreter & translator

Before we started, I thought my challenge was getting the words right. After a few sessions, I saw that the real work was thinking about who I was writing for: what they needed to understand, and what I assumed they already knew. William taught me to write for one reader, not two, even when they're almost identical. Once I could see that reader, I knew which stories would make my point, and organizing my thoughts got easier. If you want a teacher who helps you think more deeply, find answers within yourself and see your blind spots, sign up right away.

Josh Knox
Josh Knox
Writer & data consultant

The first stage of writing is just writing consistently. Writing courses and writing groups are good for building consistency. But you get to a point where you need good feedback to improve as a writer...and nobody tells you what good feedback actually looks like. This course builds that skill, creates a shared language for good critique, and develops a community of people who are serious about writing and giving/receiving high-quality feedback.

Ishita Singh
Ishita Singh
Writer & coach

I'd been through one of the big online writing courses, but afterward I drifted — a long break, and I'd started leaning on AI to edit my work, feeling myself lose my edge. I needed a community to pull me back in. William's course gave me exactly that: human feedback I can actually rely on to sharpen my essays, the kind you can't get from AI. It made writing fun again.

Lois van Waardenberg
Author

I've had feedback from trained writers, from friends and family, from a hundred-odd book reviews — and most of it either pulls its punches or reads your work as a product: did it give me pleasure? William's course was different. By giving us tools and setting norms, he trained us to engage with each other's writing as a craft — would it be pleasurable or useful to someone else? When another writer described my piece back to me, it was exactly what I'd been trying to say. And having empathic feedback around what didn't land for that reader, with a light frame to fall back on — well, there aren't many places you can get that.

Ved Shankar
Ved Shankar
Consultant & writer, The Strategy Guild

William's writing program is good for people who aren't looking for just attention and likes, but who are actually interested in understanding the craft of writing.

His expertise is what does it for me. He brings a lot of his experience from the classroom and from working with different writers. He's like a giant library of writing techniques, concepts and frameworks.

If you're looking for someone who can answer any question you have about writing, he's the right person.

KK
KK
ESG professional & writer, Hong Kong

What I got from the sprint was depth. William guided me through close readings and showed me how to find the underlying theme in a piece — and how to make it land for the reader. That's a level of guidance I hadn't found in my other writing groups. It changed how I read, too; I read more like a writer now. But what stayed with me was learning to think about my own writing that way.

Jolleen Opula
Jolleen
Community & Membership Strategist

I didn't like writing because it reminded me of college writing, which felt like something I had to do but never enjoyed. I tried writing how-to articles but what I wrote bored even me, and it was the kind of writing that AI can do now. I joined the writing sprint to figure out how to write in a way that excites me and is useful to my readers. The big shift for me was learning how my writing lands for the readers through the LOR writing exercises. This got me excited to write again and I even restarted my newsletter. I now have a clear sense of how I want to write and I am enjoying the process of writing.

What Viewers Say

Questions

Should I send you my draft before the call?

You can. Send it at least 24 hours before the call and I'll look it over briefly in advance. If it arrives later than that, I may not have time to review it. Either way, don't expect a draft full of comments at the start of the session. We open it together, settle what the piece is trying to do and who it's for, then walk the structure: where your reader slows down, where your point is hiding, what has to move and why. You see each judgement as it's made and can interrogate it while I'm still in the room.

What if I don't have a draft yet?

Bring whatever's on your desk: notes, an outline, a proposal, slides from a talk, a transcript of you explaining the idea aloud. It doesn't have to be good. It just has to exist. Some clients book to settle the shape of a project before they start writing.

Will you line-edit my writing?

No. We work top-down: the point, the reader, the structure, the paragraph logic. If a sentence-level problem is part of a larger pattern, I'll flag it. The goal is for you to see your writing the way a reader sees it, not to fix commas.

Can I book more than one session?

Yes. This work is most effective as an ongoing collaboration, but I understand wanting to test the fit first. So start with a single session. At the end of the call, based on your project and goals, I'll recommend whether a 10-session package makes sense. If you sign on, your first session fee is deducted from the package price, so you don't pay twice. As an ongoing client, you also lock in the current rate for every session in the package and get priority when booking.

Can I reschedule?

Up to 24 hours before the start time, free, with the link in your confirmation email. Changes inside 24 hours are non-refundable.

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Think I can help?

Bring whatever's on your desk: a draft, an outline, a talk, a chapter you couldn't finish.

Book your call

Or email me at will@writerscience.com