I Analysed 100 Opening Paragraphs. Here's What Makes Readers Obsessed.

Why readers skip your introductions (hint: it's not about hooks) and the 3-part structure that makes them actually care about your ideas.
I Analysed 100 Opening Paragraphs. Here's What Makes Readers Obsessed.

One of the most common mistakes I see in professional and academic writing is in the opening.

Writers open with topics—their ideas, their beliefs, their confidence in the importance of their own ideas.

Cool, but why should readers care?

In this video, I break down the 3-part introduction structure I discovered after analyzing 100+ professional essays—the one that actually makes readers want to keep reading. Hope it helps!

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