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What comes first controls the interpretation of what comes next.


Pennies make dollars, my old man always said.

But do sentences make paragraphs?

I used to think so.

Whenever I was having trouble with a paragraph, I'd get to work on the sentences—reword, restructure, revise—until they buffed out to a polished shine.

But zoom back out, and the paragraph is still a mess. It's just a different mess than the one that came before.

I'd end up rewriting the same paragraph again and again, and it never got better because I was working on the wrong thing.

Then I learned about Lev Kuleshov, the Soviet filmmaker.

This changed how I approach structure in writing.

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