I retyped a whole McCarthy novel to become a great writer. (It didn't work.)
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I retyped a whole McCarthy novel to become a great writer. (It didn't work.)

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You can't learn to write by blindly copying prose, like the proverbial monkey at a typewriter. But you can ape it out.


The legend goes that Hunter S. Thompson, learning to write, typed out the whole of The Great Gatsby word for word. And then A Farewell to Arms. The idea being that he could feel great prose move through his own fingers.

Monkey see, monkey do.

Copywriters get the same advice: find a famous sales letter, copy it out by hand, and the mechanics will seep into you by osmosis.

I believed it enough to test it. I retyped All the Pretty Horses, start to finish.

But when I went back to my own writing, nothing had changed. I was no closer to McCarthy than before I started.

I'd walked in his footsteps, but I learned nothing of how he chose that path.

So I tried the opposite.

Instead of copying out great writing, like the proverbial monkey at a typewriter, I aped it out.

Reader, it worked!

Here's how:

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