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7 entries · last tended July 2026
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Cut the runway and fix the ending first
Delete the warm-up at the top, set a north star, and cut for emphasis — not just for length.
July 2026
Intertextual references are heavy
Every allusion drags its whole constellation behind it; keep one or two that do real work.
July 2026
Make every visual earn its place
A diagram faces the same test as a sentence — what work does it do, and does it do it here?
July 2026
Cut what the reader can infer
Most bloat is words the reader already has — the empty tic, the doubled synonym, the meaning another word carries; delete all three.
July 2026
Find the one exact word
After you've cut the deadwood, some five-word phrases still hide a single exact word; trade the phrase for the word.
July 2026
Write in the affirmative
A negative makes the reader compute a reversal before they understand you; say what is, not what isn't.
July 2026
Length follows content, not a rhythm rule
"Vary your sentence length for music" is advice about word count, not music; a sentence is long because it carries a lot and short when the point lands.
July 2026
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