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16 entries · last tended July 2026
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Free Indirect Style
A mode of narration that slips a character's own voice into the third person — reporting a mind without quoting it, and without the narrator stepping in to say so.
July 2026
Out-human the machine
The defence against generic AI prose is the craft these entries catalog — concrete images, a found thesis, a real change, a voice that has sat with the material.
July 2026
To essay is to try
A speech asserts; an essay tries — put a real test of your own claim on the page, and let the reader watch you think instead of preach.
July 2026
Write to think, not to report
The expert doesn't write down a finished thought; the writing is how the thought gets finished — so draft to discover, not to deliver.
July 2026
Voice is lived experience, not word choice
A writer's voice isn't the grammar or diction on the surface — it's an emergent thing, arising from a life the machine hasn't lived.
July 2026
Break the rule on purpose
Learn the rule, then break it with a specific effect in mind — the deliberate wrong choice is a move a rule-following machine can't make.
July 2026
Write with stakes
Real writing happens when real readers you respect will judge it; manufacture that accountability and the prose gets clarity, depth, and care.
July 2026
Write with whimsy — play, not judgment
Treat the page as a place of judgment and you write with anxiety; treat it as a place of play and you follow the thread into things the machine never would.
July 2026
Read to talk back, not to summarize
A highlight saves a quote; a note saves a thought. Read to argue with the text — where is it the same as what you think, and where different?
July 2026
Capture ideas as atomic notes you can link
Write each idea as a single self-contained thought in your own words, and link it to another — an idea that can't attach to anything isn't ready.
July 2026
Use AI on your thinking, not instead of it
Don't let AI do your reading, connecting, or writing; let it navigate the knowledge graph you built — a layer over your thinking, never a replacement for it.
July 2026
When you're blocked, stop forcing it
Writer's block isn't a discipline problem; it's your unconscious refusing a project you've outgrown — and you cannot force the unconscious.
July 2026
Trust the night shift
Go to bed stuck and wake up further along — your unconscious keeps working the problem after you stop. Hand it the problem and let it run.
July 2026
A sentence is relationships, not words
Meaning doesn't live in the words; it lives in the relationships between them — so if you love words, write a dictionary; if you want to write, get obsessed with sentences.
July 2026
Practice the forms — a writer's scales
Musicians have scales; writers can too — practice sentence form by swapping words into a structure, and you build command of the shapes beneath great sentences.
July 2026
A personal tone isn't unobjective
Impersonal, passive prose doesn't make you objective — it just makes you dull; a personal tone engages the reader without giving up a shred of accuracy.
July 2026
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Restraint & Cutting
The Abstract Made Concrete
Making Something Change
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