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It’s not just what you say. It's not even how you say it. Clarity is all about where you say it.


It’s not just what you say.

It's not even how you say it.

Clear writing is all about where you say it.

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The way you organize information has a huge impact on the clarity of your writing.

E.g., Imagine you're sharing temperature readings taken over time.

You could present them like this:

t=15’, T=32°C; t=0’, T=25°C; t=6’, T=29°C; t=3’, T=27°C; t=12’, T=32°C; t=9’, T=31°C

Or, you could put them into a table:

Time (min) Temperature (°C)
0 25
3 27
6 29
9 31
12 32
15 32

Which one’s easier to understand? It's pretty obvious.

But watch what happens if we flip the columns around, putting temperature first:

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